ChatGPTくんに文章校正してもらったよ!(メモ用)
元の文章
恒星は自らが光を放つ天体であるが、その表面はどうなっているだろうか。 夜空にかがやく星々は、
地球からはるか遠くにあり、実際に観察することは難しい。 しかし太陽は、月と同様になじみ深い
天体であり、私たちの住む地球から 最も近い位置にある恒星である。
そのため、私たちが表面のようすをくわしく観測できる唯一の恒星である。太陽の特徴をくわしく調べることは、 ほかの恒星の特徴を知るためにも重要である。
私が英語に直したもの(修正された箇所は下線)
Fixed stars are celestial bodies that emit light by themselves.
Do you know how surface they are?
It's hard to observe stars shining in the night sky.
But the sun is a celestial body that familiar to us like the moon.
And it is the nearest to earth that we live.
For that reason, the sun is the only fixed star we can observe in detail.
It is important to observe in detail the sun's features For knowing other fixed star features.
ChatGPTが校正したもの(指示は「より自然で、
分かりやすい表現になるように」。修正箇所は下線、
追加箇所は太字)
Fixed stars are celestial bodies that emit light independently
Have you ever wondered about their surface?
Although it can be challenging to observe stars shining in the night sky,
the sun is a celestial body that is familiar to us, similar to the moon.
Additionally, it is the closest to Earth. Because of this, the sun is the only fixed star that
we can observe in detail.
It is crucial to study the sun's features in depth as it can aid in understanding the features
of other fixed stars.
私が英語に直したもの②(指示は「元の文章に近い
表現になるように」。修正された箇所は下線)
Fixed stars are celestial bodies that emit light by themselves.
Do you know how surface they are? It's hard to observe stars shining in the night sky. But the sun is a celestial body that familiar to us like the moon.
And it is the nearest to earth that we live.
For that reason, the sun is the only fixed star we can observe in detail.
It is important to observe in detail the sun's features For knowing other fixed star features.
ChatGPTが校正したもの②(修正箇所は下線)
Fixed stars are celestial bodies that emit light by themselves,
but have you ever wondered what their surfaces are like?
Stars shining in the night sky are far away from Earth and difficult to observe.
However, the sun is a familiar celestial body, similar to the moon,and is the nearest star to
Earth. Therefore, the sun is the only fixed star that we can observe in detail. It is
important to study the sun's features in detail because this knowledge can help us
understand other fixed stars' characteristics.
